Friday 21 September 2012

That embrace.

She was standing by the door..
Holding a cup of hot coffee getting cold..

Looking at the rain falling down hard..
Lost in thoughts too wayward..

Rains brought along a series of dreams..
Dreams that was forming in a string of beautiful streams..

Each falling rain drop made her think of love..
Love of which she had always dreamed of..

Love which still had to knock on her door..
Love which still had to take her to the beautiful world so far..

Will she feel it soon or will it take forever and long?!
Will it be perfect or will it just all go Wrong?!

Will it be just a small time feeling or will it be a bond so strong?!
Will it be a happy ending or will it bring tears along?!

Will it be like a fairytale story or will the reality make it into even more a beautiful song?!
Who will be the one to whom she would forever and ever belong?!

A thousand questions she had in mind..
A thousand feelings she still had to find..

She just knew she had to wait for the perfect one..
Till then she had her dreams to dream upon..

Woken up by the thunder's voice..
She went ahead to feel the rain on her Eyes..

Her face glowed with the Smile that showed for that second..
She Embraced the rain for that moment..

(P.S. : An attempt at a poem . The feeling is the one that i am going through so just made it into a poem :) Best wishes to you reader.. Stay Smiling :) )

19 comments:

  1. Crazily Beautifully Awesomely Fabulously Genuinely Kindly Lovingly Mesmerizing :D

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    1. wow.. so many great words.. thank you so much.. :) :)

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  2. Hey!!
    This is amazingly simple and beautiful!

    Happy blogging and happy tweeting!

    Cheers :)

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    1. Thank you so much sneha :) stay smiling :)

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  3. Ah, slowly , I see a poet coming out of the cocoon. Amazing stuff, this. Lovely verses. :)

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    1. Thanx a lot for appreciation and motivation :)

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    2. Exactly Shail, just see the composition at the first stroke man :D

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    3. Ashwin i just took your advice and let the feelings flow.. so thank you :)

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    4. Pretty good for a newbie mate. There's no doubt, Himani is sure one of you people. :)

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    5. Himi :) Cheers.. Stay Awesome

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    6. Thanx both of you.. stay smiling :) :)

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  4. This is something new. Sweet, thoughtful, full of feelings yet to be experienced. Very intriguing. Something different, but made me smile :)

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    1. Thank you dreamer :) If i could make anyone Smile than the post is worth it :) :) stay smiling :)

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  5. Awesome rhyming....Very beautiful and sweet poem....

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    1. Thank you so much sri valli.. :) Stay smiling :)

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  6. You nailed it with these lines,
    "Woken up by the thunder's voice..
    She went ahead to feel the rain on her Eyes..

    Her face glowed with the Smile that showed for that second..
    She Embraced the rain for that moment.."

    It felt like when everyone else is complaining about why there is rain, She took it the other way, embraced it and let herself to be carried away by those rainy moments...:)

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    1. Thank you :) I really liked your comment. and yes rains have a power to take you to a different world all together.. :) and this poem is based on a true story :)

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